It's been a couple of years since I read the original version of this story, so the only edit that popped out at me was the line "The automata had invaded the city", which I remember us talking about at one point. I'm trying to remember if the first paragraph was the same before, because I think it's a really strong opening. Anyways, congratulations!
I'm only a little ways through this, and damn, but it's stirring stuff!I shall read on!- Clockwork Crump
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